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    June 29, 2010

    #22

    Shake the earth you ride on, baby.

    I’m a commin’ with my hair real long.

    Take a hit, and you’ll go flyin’ baby.

    The trip, no, you won’t be gone.

    Just take a breath

    And make the sip the supply, the life, and the lift

    You’ll ever gonna need, baby.

     
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